The Path

I am on the path where my fears 
are capturing my hearts braveness
I am on a way where my tears
Are flowing to cover my hidden talents 

The way where I am getting darkness 
But still my soul says 
That's the only path to overcome badness
Of the envy hate and superiority 

The path is making me non existent 
Yet making me independent 
Unknowing the beauty of its extent 
I am walking in this path of destruction 

The way is leading me to the inner blackness
To discover the inner stranger
Holding all the grudges under brightness
To make me perfect for society 

The inner dark self 
Radiant yet pitch black
Making mr realize 
I am on path of self discovery
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Bangalee Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 1:15 AM
introspective poem; greatly enjoyed
Kotasthane  Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 5:19 AM
Thanks a lot.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 8:41 AM
This is well thought out! Especially liked this part: "Holding all the grudges under brightness To make me perfect for society"
Kotasthane  Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 9:05 PM
Thanks a lot for taking time to read it out. And I really appreciate your feedback.
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