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The Path

I am on the path where my fears are capturing my hearts braveness I am on a way where my tears Are flowing to cover my hidden talents The way where I am getting darkness But still my soul says That's the only path to overcome badness Of the envy hate and superiority The path is making me non existent Yet making me independent Unknowing the beauty of its extent I am walking in this path of destruction The way is leading me to the inner blackness To discover the inner stranger Holding all the grudges under brightness To make me perfect for society The inner dark self Radiant yet pitch black Making mr realize I am on path of self discovery

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Date: 1/23/2020 1:15:00 AM
introspective poem; greatly enjoyed
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Tithi Kotasthane
Date: 1/23/2020 5:19:00 AM
Thanks a lot.
Date: 1/9/2020 8:41:00 AM
This is well thought out! Especially liked this part: "Holding all the grudges under brightness To make me perfect for society"
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Tithi Kotasthane
Date: 1/10/2020 9:05:00 PM
Thanks a lot for taking time to read it out. And I really appreciate your feedback.

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