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The Passion of a Jue Ju

so mesmerized by your face sweet scent draws me in I am lost in desire your name on my lips... Barbara Gorelick Passion Of A Jue Ju contest 7/25/14

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/29/2014 9:11:00 AM

Ahh!! The passionate Jue Jue..Reads like a winner to me. Way to go for the contest..I am glad that I chose this one today..Thanks for reading my Haiku..I am sure my husbands sentiments exactly as it was his outline marker that is that raschal..Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/28/2014 1:27:00 PM

Romantic and beautiful! I love it!

David Mohn

Date: 7/26/2014 8:01:00 PM

I love this Barbara...great write!

Greg Hoffman

Date: 7/26/2014 3:24:00 PM

I just keep reading this over and over,can't help myself.I would say good luck in the contest but I don't think you'll need any:).Very nice work

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/26/2014 4:19:00 AM

Strong feelings ,, of passion Barbara! It's really awesome! Gl in contest!

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/25/2014 9:38:00 PM

Sweet passion you nailed my friend. I could see me saying that to my beautiful sweet wife... BBravo!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2014 8:56:00 PM

wow, this is good!! I have not really studied out the rules of this form yet but it kind of looks like an extension of haiku. Cool!!

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/25/2014 7:36:00 PM

there is passion in this poem you can feel

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/25/2014 7:50:00 PM

Hi there..Im glad you "got it"..Im never sure about my writing.

Leon Enriquez

Date: 7/25/2014 6:58:00 PM

Dear BG: Sensual. Where are the missing verses? Ha-ha-ha! Leon

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/25/2014 7:49:00 PM

The missing verses are in your imagination..lol..thanks for stopping by...

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/25/2014 6:17:00 PM

Ooh that is sensual,, leaves me curious to what comes next...but that would be a longer poem...i would hope....:-P Best of luck Barbara :) hugs

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/25/2014 7:47:00 PM

Thank you my dear..I think I remember sensual...lol.