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The Passion of a Jue Ju

so mesmerized by your face
sweet scent draws me in
I am lost in desire
your name on my lips...



Barbara Gorelick
Passion Of A Jue Ju contest
7/25/14

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2014

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July 29, 2014 at 9:11 AM

Ahh!! The passionate Jue Jue..Reads like a winner to me. Way to go for the contest..I am glad that I chose this one today..Thanks for reading my Haiku..I am sure my husbands sentiments exactly as it was his outline marker that is that raschal..Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

July 28, 2014 at 1:27 PM

Romantic and beautiful! I love it!

July 26, 2014 at 8:01 PM

I love this Barbara...great write!

July 26, 2014 at 3:24 PM

I just keep reading this over and over,can't help myself.I would say good luck in the contest but I don't think you'll need any:).Very nice work

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 26, 2014 at 4:19 AM

Strong feelings ,, of passion Barbara! It's really awesome! Gl in contest!

July 25, 2014 at 9:38 PM

Sweet passion you nailed my friend. I could see me saying that to my beautiful sweet wife... BBravo!!!

Andrea Dietrich

July 25, 2014 at 8:56 PM

wow, this is good!! I have not really studied out the rules of this form yet but it kind of looks like an extension of haiku. Cool!!

Frederic Parker

July 25, 2014 at 7:36 PM

there is passion in this poem you can feel

Barbara Gorelick

July 25, 2014 at 7:50 PM

Hi there..Im glad you "got it"..Im never sure about my writing.

July 25, 2014 at 6:58 PM

Dear BG: Sensual. Where are the missing verses? Ha-ha-ha! Leon

Barbara Gorelick

July 25, 2014 at 7:49 PM

The missing verses are in your imagination..lol..thanks for stopping by...

July 25, 2014 at 6:17 PM

Ooh that is sensual,, leaves me curious to what comes next...but that would be a longer poem...i would hope....:-P Best of luck Barbara :) hugs

Barbara Gorelick

July 25, 2014 at 7:47 PM

Thank you my dear..I think I remember sensual...lol.

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