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The Passion of a Jue Ju

so mesmerized by your face
sweet scent draws me in
I am lost in desire
your name on my lips...



Barbara Gorelick
Passion Of A Jue Ju contest
7/25/14

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2014

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Sara Kendrick Date: 7/29/2014 9:11:00 AM Ahh!! The passionate Jue Jue..Reads like a winner to me. Way to go for the contest..I am glad that I chose this one today..Thanks for reading my Haiku..I am sure my husbands sentiments exactly as it was his outline marker that is that raschal..Sara Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/28/2014 1:27:00 PM Romantic and beautiful! I love it! Login to Reply

David Mohn Date: 7/26/2014 8:01:00 PM I love this Barbara...great write! Login to Reply

Greg Hoffman Date: 7/26/2014 3:24:00 PM I just keep reading this over and over,can't help myself.I would say good luck in the contest but I don't think you'll need any:).Very nice work Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/26/2014 4:19:00 AM Strong feelings ,, of passion Barbara! It's really awesome! Gl in contest! Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 7/25/2014 9:38:00 PM Sweet passion you nailed my friend. I could see me saying that to my beautiful sweet wife... BBravo!!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/25/2014 8:56:00 PM wow, this is good!! I have not really studied out the rules of this form yet but it kind of looks like an extension of haiku. Cool!! Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 7/25/2014 7:36:00 PM there is passion in this poem you can feel Login to Reply Barbara Gorelick Date: 7/25/2014 7:50:00 PM Hi there..Im glad you "got it"..Im never sure about my writing.

Leon Enriquez Date: 7/25/2014 6:58:00 PM Dear BG: Sensual. Where are the missing verses? Ha-ha-ha! Leon Login to Reply Barbara Gorelick Date: 7/25/2014 7:49:00 PM The missing verses are in your imagination..lol..thanks for stopping by...

Casarah Nance Date: 7/25/2014 6:17:00 PM Ooh that is sensual,, leaves me curious to what comes next...but that would be a longer poem...i would hope....:-P Best of luck Barbara :) hugs Login to Reply Barbara Gorelick Date: 7/25/2014 7:47:00 PM Thank you my dear..I think I remember sensual...lol.