The Park

The shadows cast from childhood’s grace,
From oaks once climbed with wondered zeal, 
Still gently shade the heart’s chaste place.

A park where myths and dreams were real,
So long as thoughts remained puerile -
Imagination’s grass strewn stage.

Unchecked these shadows wane with age,
As grownup winds strip bare the trees,
Yet memories can still – assuage;
A canopy of youth’s reprise.  

Rhyme – ababbccdcd
French form - 8 syllables per line
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A. Sharma Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 10:03 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win david.
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:49 AM
I like the form you chose for yours and the development of your theme. Congrats for your win, David.
A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 9:34 PM
David, Congratulations on your awesome win. Always ~LINDA~
George   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 6:26 PM
Many congrats on your win with this perfect Dizain, David. Elaine
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 3:40 PM
very good example of this dizain form. I hope you do well in the contest!
Callus Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 12:40 PM
An interesting form which I have yet to tackle. So true that with increasing age, it is only the memories that can take us back to our youth. // paul
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