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Inspired by the heart of Andrea Dietrich, it is easy to be a good poet, it is much harder to be a good person with a kind heart and soul, she is all of the above!

The Paper Clip They were such a lovely couple From a very very rich family I was invited to The birthday party She was all of three Adorable and soon ever more sweet Once the candles were blown That huge cake would be such a treat Now the presents were a plenty Clothes, jewelry, toys Dolls, doll houses and bikes and more joys I was somewhat shy, mine was not so grandiose I had wrapped in an old cigar box Another box much smaller Inside a third box even smaller Inside that me gift A small piece of paper Folded with a bright red paper clip A wee little poem That said these simple words You are a treasure Hidden inside these many boxes So beautiful and worth the discovery You are the jewels of life, you so lovely I had drawn a pretty princess On the paper fine in pink redress I read her the words From the bottom of my heart Her eyes lit up so bright I got the hugest biggest hug in sight She ran away with a paper clip and Three old cigar boxes In a child’s happiness and Pure delight I sighed The gift was so just right! An afterthought from ancient times The Poetry of Wine Gifts that come from the heart Light up the soul When you gaze into a starlit sky Count the millions of gifts from the heart Their goodness shall shine Upon us mortals

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Date: 12/1/2016 7:05:00 PM
This warmed my heart and had me smiling. Wonderful poem. love phyl
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Date: 11/30/2016 5:07:00 PM
This poem is precious!!
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Date: 11/29/2016 6:08:00 PM
Wonderful poem my friend, it warmed my heart to read it and brought a big smile to my face! You continue to amaze me with your writing and passion. All the best. Live and love generously.
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Date: 11/29/2016 5:55:00 PM
Such a cute write! The images at the top really added to the imagery and the story :) Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 11/29/2016 4:20:00 PM
Super 7 Arthur dedicated to a super poet! Keith
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/6/2016 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Keith!
Date: 11/29/2016 9:59:00 AM
This is so incredibly beautiful and touching Arthur. This made me smile as I read today. Just this feeling, the one your words describe has washed over me. Gifts that are easily bought, require little thought. But those with love shall start, a smile upon the heart. Wonderfully written my friend.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/6/2016 9:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for such kind words!
Date: 11/29/2016 8:07:00 AM
It is so true the little ones get intrigued by the boxes, the paper, things new to them but also things that involve imagination. I remember get a new refrigerator or stove and the kids playing in the boxes for days....love your wine poem too
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/6/2016 9:26:00 AM
Its all in the wrapping! :) even for us!
Date: 11/29/2016 3:43:00 AM
Cont..So what you've written in that poem is true..The value of a gift lies not in the price but in the heart we put into it...Share gifts and cards sealed not with who gives most..but who gives wholeheartedly.A lovely poem.Re Andrea-I love her so much.She is an inspiration..a community builder...a soul sister.and a friend. Fantastic poem..A fave.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/6/2016 9:26:00 AM
You are too kind, thank you!
Date: 11/29/2016 3:40:00 AM
Art...You know what,my four year old is learning to write...Few days ago while I was cooking..She opened my cards drawer..I keep new cards I buy for when an occasion arises...In twenty mins..I wasnt.seeing.her...She scribbled all over the cards.At first I nearly got angry..until she told me..'Mommy are you happy.Can you read what Ive.written?''.There were only scribbles everywhere and color even on her hands.She said'Mommy ,you re the best mom in d world'I love you'.I hugged her tightly then.Cnt
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/6/2016 9:25:00 AM
That is so cute and sweet! She must be so adorable!!!
Date: 11/29/2016 3:02:00 AM
Excellent and beautiful write. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing it.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/6/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words Ravi.
Date: 11/28/2016 11:15:00 PM
OH MY GOSH, I am so delighted with this, Arthur. You took the little video I posted on FB and made another little story equally beautiful to show the gratitude of a heart that does not care about riches or glory. Just being grateful for every little thing we have. Thanks so much for the dedication. I am honored and flattered. BIG FAVE
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/6/2016 9:24:00 AM
I thank you Andrea, its great to be inspired!
Date: 11/28/2016 10:13:00 PM
Beautiful!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/28/2016 11:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Carol!

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