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The Palmetto Bug

Once while visiting my wife's mom There was a disruption to the calm When a very large palmetto bug Went quickly scurrying across the rug My wife was shaken down to her core But her mother had seen them before When it was just about to reach her She put here bare foot on the creature! I have to say that was a surprise There was terror in my wife's eyes When it got loose she let out a yell You'd think the devil came up from hell! Her knees up to her chin would reach Every high step brought out a screech The bug passed on, her mom did it in But now we can say remember when!

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Date: 12/25/2017 6:03:00 PM
Sounds like you have a very brave mother in law Pat…some of those palmetto bugs are HUGE!! Brings back Floridian memories…A funny nostalgic write Pat! Happy holidays!~Che :)
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Date: 12/25/2017 7:53:00 PM
This was in Hinesville GA. Pretty close!.........Hope your Christmas was all you wanted!!.......patrick
Date: 12/25/2017 3:56:00 PM
your mother-in-law is a brave woman, pat! i enjoyed your description of this event - very funny!
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Date: 12/25/2017 7:51:00 PM
I guess it's what you're used to. We had roaches when I was young in Wichita, but I've never seen one that big before!!...pat
Date: 12/25/2017 12:06:00 PM
Lol...Pat! This is great! Love your humor.
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Date: 12/25/2017 7:50:00 PM
Thank you Rhoda. That means a lot!!............pat

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