The Palmetto Bug

Once while visiting my wife's mom
There was a disruption to the calm
When a very large palmetto bug
Went quickly scurrying across the rug

My wife was shaken down to her core
But her mother had seen them before
When it was just about to reach her
She put here bare foot on the creature!

I have to say that was a surprise
There was terror in my wife's eyes
When it got loose she let out a yell
You'd think the devil came up from hell!

Her knees up to her chin would reach
Every high step brought out a screech
The bug passed on, her mom did it in
But now we can say remember when!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/25/2017 6:03:00 PM
Sounds like you have a very brave mother in law Pat…some of those palmetto bugs are HUGE!! Brings back Floridian memories…A funny nostalgic write Pat! Happy holidays!~Che :)
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Date: 12/25/2017 7:53:00 PM
This was in Hinesville GA. Pretty close!.........Hope your Christmas was all you wanted!!.......patrick
Date: 12/25/2017 3:56:00 PM
your mother-in-law is a brave woman, pat! i enjoyed your description of this event - very funny!
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Date: 12/25/2017 7:51:00 PM
I guess it's what you're used to. We had roaches when I was young in Wichita, but I've never seen one that big before!!...pat
Date: 12/25/2017 12:06:00 PM
Lol...Pat! This is great! Love your humor.
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Date: 12/25/2017 7:50:00 PM
Thank you Rhoda. That means a lot!!............pat
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