The Palm Tree

THE PALM TREE

Sadly, my time on Earth is coming to an end
Where I’ve witnessed all human’s wonders and all their dirt;
Cried for the dying and rejoiced for every new birth,
Watched greed rule over what should have been shared
Strongly fought all winds and stood unimpaired.

Change your ways, there’s still time
Plant more trees for children to climb
Love each other, abolish all crime
Live your innocence like a nursery rhyme.

Talk face to face, don’t hide behind a screen
I can’t watch humanity turn into a machine
Share your stories, tell all that you’ve seen.

Roll the dime, risk your luck and play all cards
But don’t trust too much to let down all your guards!

See through, see beyond. No, never be fooled.

Enjoy life, dance and flirt
Scatter beauty everywhere, any time
Don’t get stuck to what should have been
Release that inside you which has been barred
Let the power within unfold
Let the truth inside you reveal the untold!
Because I've challenged winds and kept strong
and I know you can also do it all along!



10-02-2018

5TH PLACE
MINUANETTA - Poetry Contest
Gregory Barden's MINUANETTA Contest using rhyme scheme of AAAAA, BBBB, CCC, DD, E, ABCDE, at least 20 lines. 
Theme is "CHREMAMORPHISM"
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Gentry Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 2:58 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Natasha. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Your rhythm and rhyme were amazing. It is an inspirational and delightful minuanetta. Lots of wisdom here.
Turner Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 3:05 PM
You're a lovely soul. Thanks Susan. Hugs :)
Barden Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 2:35 PM
This has such a poignant message and creative flow to it, Natasha, and I love the overall piece. I ranked it lower than I wished to, as the rhyme in the first verse is not correct - every line should be the same rhyme in each stanza, and you have a couple of different rhymes in that one. A beautiful poem, however, so I placed it just the same, (and it was close). Congratulations on your placement, and thank you for entering my contest! :-)
Turner Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 2:54 PM
It's ok Greg :) I appreciate your msg a lot. Cheers! :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Great messaging, Natasha. Congrats on your placement.
Turner Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 8:21 AM
So glad we met through poetry Line and shared the same depth and passion:)
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February 10, 2018 at 2:21 PM
A powerful eloquent pen Natasha, enjoyed! I especially love "plant more trees for children to climb". A lovely day to you! xomo :)
Turner Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 3:08 PM
Much appreciated. Thanks :)
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