Home » Poems » Kim Rodrigues » The Painting

The Painting

PRELUDE wet brush sigh…hush ACT I hued dip and drip ACT II small dots sea spots INTERMISSION light flash waves crash ACT III wet stones oak bones ACT IV night rouse lighthouse DENOUEMENT art’s grim a hymn

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/23/2023 6:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Kim, with this lovely poem

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2023 6:28:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad!

Paige Hind

Date: 8/22/2023 2:10:00 PM

I loved this!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2023 5:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paige!

Valsa George

Date: 8/19/2023 2:52:00 AM

Thses are lovely footles..... dear Kim. Enjoyed much.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2023 5:58:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/17/2023 4:05:00 PM

Love this series of footles, Kim. What an interesting story they tell! Hope your evening is nice. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 5:01:00 PM

Evelyn, have a wonderful evening too! Thank you :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/17/2023 9:53:00 AM

A creative/fun Footle write. Love it. Have a great day.............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 10:07:00 AM

Thank you, Paula! I always enjoy you stopping by my page!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/17/2023 1:31:00 AM

- Always looks so easy to write footle... but I know it's not... great work, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 5:12:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/16/2023 9:39:00 PM

Great string of footles Kim, theyre so addictive once you start. If they're for a contest, good luck. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 5:10:00 AM

Thank you, Tom! Fun configuring them!

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/16/2023 7:16:00 PM

you made me think of Jackson Pollock ( drippings), this is a very creative poem, and very inspiring too, bravo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2023 7:57:00 PM

Thank you, Yann! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/16/2023 6:47:00 PM

art's grim, alright. This sure reads like the testimony of one who's been there more than once. ~ Novice Nerd

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2023 8:08:00 PM

In Peggy’s Cove, Nova Scotia the sign at the lighthouse says: Warning: Injury and death have rewarded careless sight seers here. The ocean and rocks are treacherous. Savour the sea from a distance. (If rocks are wet, don’t step on them)