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The Painting

PRELUDE
wet brush
sigh…hush

ACT I
hued dip
and drip

ACT II
small dots
sea spots

INTERMISSION
light flash
waves crash

ACT III
wet stones
oak bones

ACT IV
night rouse
lighthouse

DENOUEMENT
art’s grim
a hymn

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2023

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Sotto Poet Date: 8/23/2023 6:29:00 AM Congratulations on your win, Kim, with this lovely poem Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/23/2023 6:28:00 PM Thank you, Lasaad!

Paige Hind Date: 8/22/2023 2:10:00 PM I loved this! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/22/2023 5:07:00 PM Thank you so much, Paige!

Valsa George Date: 8/19/2023 2:52:00 AM Thses are lovely footles..... dear Kim. Enjoyed much. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/19/2023 5:58:00 AM Thank you, Valsa!

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/17/2023 4:05:00 PM Love this series of footles, Kim. What an interesting story they tell! Hope your evening is nice. :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/17/2023 5:01:00 PM Evelyn, have a wonderful evening too! Thank you :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/17/2023 9:53:00 AM A creative/fun Footle write. Love it. Have a great day............. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/17/2023 10:07:00 AM Thank you, Paula! I always enjoy you stopping by my page!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2023 1:31:00 AM - Always looks so easy to write footle... but I know it's not... great work, Kim :) - hugs Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/17/2023 5:12:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise! xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/16/2023 9:39:00 PM Great string of footles Kim, theyre so addictive once you start. If they're for a contest, good luck. Tom Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/17/2023 5:10:00 AM Thank you, Tom! Fun configuring them!

Yann Rolland Date: 8/16/2023 7:16:00 PM you made me think of Jackson Pollock ( drippings), this is a very creative poem, and very inspiring too, bravo Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/16/2023 7:57:00 PM Thank you, Yann! :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/16/2023 6:47:00 PM art's grim, alright. This sure reads like the testimony of one who's been there more than once. ~ Novice Nerd Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/16/2023 8:08:00 PM In Peggy’s Cove, Nova Scotia the sign at the lighthouse says: Warning: Injury and death have rewarded careless sight seers here. The ocean and rocks are treacherous. Savour the sea from a distance. (If rocks are wet, don’t step on them)