Kim Rodrigues Poet Footle

The Painting

PRELUDE
wet brush
sigh…hush

ACT I
hued dip
and drip

ACT II
small dots
sea spots

INTERMISSION
light flash
waves crash

ACT III
wet stones
oak bones

ACT IV
night rouse
lighthouse

DENOUEMENT
art’s grim
a hymn

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Sotto Poet August 23, 2023 at 6:29 AM Congratulations on your win, Kim, with this lovely poem Kim Rodrigues August 23, 2023 at 6:28 PM Thank you, Lasaad!

Paige Hind August 22, 2023 at 2:10 PM I loved this! Kim Rodrigues August 22, 2023 at 5:07 PM Thank you so much, Paige!

Valsa George August 19, 2023 at 2:52 AM Thses are lovely footles..... dear Kim. Enjoyed much. Kim Rodrigues August 19, 2023 at 5:58 AM Thank you, Valsa!

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 17, 2023 at 4:05 PM Love this series of footles, Kim. What an interesting story they tell! Hope your evening is nice. :) Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2023 at 5:01 PM Evelyn, have a wonderful evening too! Thank you :)

Paula Goldsmith August 17, 2023 at 9:53 AM A creative/fun Footle write. Love it. Have a great day............. Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2023 at 10:07 AM Thank you, Paula! I always enjoy you stopping by my page!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2023 at 1:31 AM - Always looks so easy to write footle... but I know it's not... great work, Kim :) - hugs Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2023 at 5:12 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise! xx

Tom Cunningham August 16, 2023 at 9:39 PM Great string of footles Kim, theyre so addictive once you start. If they're for a contest, good luck. Tom Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2023 at 5:10 AM Thank you, Tom! Fun configuring them!

Yann Rolland August 16, 2023 at 7:16 PM you made me think of Jackson Pollock ( drippings), this is a very creative poem, and very inspiring too, bravo Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2023 at 7:57 PM Thank you, Yann! :)

Gershon Wolf August 16, 2023 at 6:47 PM art's grim, alright. This sure reads like the testimony of one who's been there more than once. ~ Novice Nerd Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2023 at 8:08 PM In Peggy’s Cove, Nova Scotia the sign at the lighthouse says: Warning: Injury and death have rewarded careless sight seers here. The ocean and rocks are treacherous. Savour the sea from a distance. (If rocks are wet, don’t step on them)