The Painful Truth

Seeping into my reality
I feel the effects
Of excruciating pain
Destroying my soul.
It obliterates my senses
Keeping me numb inside
Everything but the pain
Is careening out of me.
My heartbeat is incredible
Beating like an idiot
It jumps off a cliff
Unknowing where it lands
It hits the bottom hard
Bleeding to the truth.

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Falotico Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 6:07 PM
Great win my friend!!!
Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 10:34 AM
Congrats on your win in Brian's great contest..Sara
Neels Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 8:22 AM
Awesome write and congratulations on your win in the contest Russell ;) WN
Jones Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 2:20 AM
raw and real. tonight i shall pray for comfort for all who suffer the unbearable. thanks for the write, russell. peace ~n
Horne Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 5:09 PM
Many congrats to you, Russell : )
Sweetheart Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 3:20 PM
Congrats Russell on your tremendous third place win with this outstanding poietry luv..
Brown Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 2:32 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "A Jewel In Your Crown" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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July 24, 2011 at 1:43 AM
AMAZING STUFF...WOWZA! - Kyle
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