The Pain Within

I've seen days of pity and days of pride I've seen tears that flow and never dry,scars so deep you can not hide the pain within that haunts your mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Deeks Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 5:18 AM
Hello Zachary I like the form in which you write, its has a flow which is strong and almost felt as a song how it left me, reading aloud. Sad but significant, to me karen
Kendrick Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 3:23 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Very emotive and expressive..Sara
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