Ashley Wisehart Poet I do not know?

The Pain They Caused

Every day she's getting cut down,
getting called fat, ugly, and stupid.

she goes home and wonders what she did to deserve this,
why she deserves to be put in this pain.

her mom doesn't listen and her dad beats her,
all she wants is to be loved

but deep down she knows that will never happen,
so she goes to the kitchen and finds a knife.

she puts it to her skin, red starts to cover everything,
as she takes her last breath, she say's she is sorry for not being what you wanted 
her to be. 


-ashley-

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Poet Destroyer A January 24, 2011 at 6:37 PM if people could just stop and put there selves in those girls shoes, sad but there's always throughout every generation gonna be bullies neglective parents, wish there was a complete stop to it all,...p.d.

January 15, 2011 at 9:19 AM Thanks for commenting on mine. Yours is also very good. If this is a fictional poem, ..keep your chin up. :]

Robert Pettit January 9, 2011 at 7:54 PM Ashley, I hope this is a fictional account. I suggest you make the following changes so your poem will appear more presentable: Change "dererve" and "dererves" to "deserve" and "deserves" respectively. In the fifth line, replace "don't" with "doesn't". Finally, in the tenth line "breathe" should be replaced by "breath".

Skat A January 9, 2011 at 6:37 PM wow, sad write, some just don't realize the pain they do cause, bullying is also what it's called shamefull but i know it might happen in this world, deep