The Pain of Rain


Those drops, like tears from heaven, fall this dreary day;
   I see the puddles forming, dimpled with the rain.
And with no sun or sky of blue, my heart does play
   with sadness while my mood reflects my inner pain.

Rain puddles shimmer 'neath the sky of smoky black
   reflecting somber visions of the world around;
of muted grays and washed-out blues that soon bring back
    those memories of heartache that play lost and found.

Amazing, how a gray and rainy day can bring
   a sorrow from my heart to rise and hurt anew.
Contagious is the dreariness that seeps and clings
   when rainy days convey their darkness there in view.

Oh, rain-filled skies, your gloomy time is surely short
   with all the solemn thoughts you somehow bring to me,
for soon the bright sunshine will dry up your support,
   and make me smile once more as raindrops set me free.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Contest: Strand Select 1
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 01/15/2020

~1st Place~
Contest: Rain 
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Judged: 08/15/2016

Iambic Hexameter: 12 syllables, 6 feet per line.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 11:03 PM
Beautiful verse, Sandra, congratulations your win. Eve
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 10:23 AM
Thank you, Eve. I always appreciate your visits and lovely comments. Hugs, Sandra
Kauffman Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 6:31 PM
Congratulations Sandra on your win with this wonderfully descriptive poem full of "rainy day" images! Being a former "Seattle-ite" these images really resonate with my memories of rainy days.
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 10:22 AM
Thank you so much, Sam, for stopping by to read my poem and for your very supportive comments. Yes, I visited Seattle a few times and have experienced those days too! Sandra
Deschler Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Yes, the weather can play a factor in how we feel each day. And, just like Mother Nature, some days we need to cry a little, too... A very, very nice poem, Sandra. Congrats on a great win!
Chansarkar Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Loved this one Sandra!Always a delight to read you words.Thanks and congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 6:25 AM
Very well composed Sandra, you truly have a gift, thanks for sharing.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 7:38 PM
Congratulations on a well written win. Hugs.....Love this poetry form.
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:30 PM
Thank you very much, Janis. I enjoy all iambic forms very much. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra , you always have a magnificent way of writing! Hug Eve
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Thank you, Eve, for another great contest and for my wonderful placement in your list. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 4:55 PM
sweet Sandra, this is perfect and my favorite in the contest...congrats on your top placement in the Rain contest! :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Thank you, Laura, for your wonderful supportive comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 5:58 PM
The joy of sunshine...lovely write Sandra...
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:25 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph. Sandra
Turner Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 9:44 AM
Seems like it's rained, every time I have attended a funeral. Rain does suggest a certain sadness. Usually when it's raining we stay home which can add to the melancholy. Masterfully written Mrs Sandra. Good luck in the contest.
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:25 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel, for your positive comment. Sandra
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