The Pain I'M In

This loneliness is breaking me,
this crushing, suffocating feeling of being alone.
It's getting harder and harder,
as I try to pretend nothing's wrong.
But then...i am so alone...
fighting my demons.
No one notices,
 no one cares.
No one sees the pain i'm in.
The things I wish I could say
are nearly bursting inside.
Yet, I can talk to no one.
no one to lend an ear, to understand.
Understand the pain I'm in
The moist tears on my cheek
glisten, and soon dry off on their own...
Unnoticed...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Rooney Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 9:05 AM
I CAN SURE RELATE TO THIS, ANGIE LOVE YOUR WORK THANKS FOR COMMENTS RAD
A  Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 5:10 PM
Angie, you can't imagine how much this hurts, to know your tears are going unnoticed. No one should fight their demons away. Sending hugs. Skat
Thajudeen Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 8:51 AM
This lonwliness is breaking me, a snap shot of the mind set not set.Good poem.
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