The Pain

The pain inside,is so hard to hide
It hurts to see your not by my side
I will never give up,this fight of my life
To have you in my arms from morning tell night

The battle inside me keeps growing
As my mind explodes from not knowing
I cannot let you slip and fade away
For the love I have for you will never go astray

Oh this pain inside is killing me alive
Should i pray to God to be by his side
And then i can dream of you and not hurt inside
But then i pray,and i know what my dad would say

You have chosen this path,make no mistake
The road ahead may be hard to take
And you may even feel that your beginning to break
My son,may you have faith
Dont ever give up your fight and follow it through
For giving up is like losing the one you love so true

This pain i have is so hard to hide
But i hope someday to be by your side
I will never give up,this fight of my life
To have you in my arms and kiss you goodnight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 11/12/2016 7:27:00 AM
Very good...Ron...pd
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Ron Davison
Date: 11/12/2016 6:28:00 PM
thank you very much,but i did lose that fight :( guess i really dont no much about writing poetry,but everything just seems to come from my heart and goes to paper.I find in my darkest times more things can be writin.and i just wanted to share with others who may be or gone down my road.
Date: 11/10/2016 10:53:00 PM
Your dad is very wise.
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