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The pain

I wish upon a falling star to erase my past and remove my scars I wish upon this blurring light for the bullying to end tonight I wish upon the razor in my hand to end the tears and the pain within I wish upon this rope I tie to end the suffering and strife I wish upon this tree I climb to not make me fail this time I wish upon this falling star to keep me here until the struggling stops

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Date: 5/27/2015 4:35:00 AM
This is definitely deep
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Date: 11/27/2014 10:33:00 PM
Welcome to the family of soupers.A nice creation that I enjoyed a lot.Regards. -Safa
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Date: 11/27/2014 5:16:00 PM
simply heartbreaking - i wish ... the bullying would stop :-( Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 11/8/2014 1:08:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Emily - I choose your first well written poem - Great ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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