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a river that splits. shills shriek may be overheard. adopting my boat

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Date: 10/8/2021 10:43:00 AM
Such a fine Haiku, Lasaad. I sense an ominous tone in a river that splits as you navigate your boat, precariously. Best wishes, Brian
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