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If only she could have come with a book, That told me exactly how to use her, Then her memory would not be a blur, And I could have taken a second look. I remember the effort that it took, For me to get things the way that they were, Only to have her mixed emotions stir Up the feelings that kept me on the hook. If only she had come with a check list, That could have told me what I should have done, Then I would not be forced to shake my fist At these stormy clouds that have blocked my sun. If I could have seen clearly through the mist, I would not have lost what I had once won.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/17/2010 7:36:00 AM
Your write is fantastic dear poet...it flows well and its content may be a typical subject, yet you engaged poesy at its finnest ! Great write ! much love, james..........p.s.....welcome to the Soups STAR club...*smiles*
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Date: 12/16/2010 7:14:00 AM
Great work...All couples need a book about the way that the opposite sex will respond in given situations or what the opposite sex will need emotionally..Great topic and presentation of the topic..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Welcome as a premium member..I hope that you enjoy all the added benefits..Sara
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Date: 12/14/2010 8:17:00 AM
Hey Dakarai ..welcome to Premium Membership.. now u can join so many other poets in sponsoring contests and blogging too as well as many other features my friend... hoping u enjoy the ride with luv..
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Date: 11/29/2010 10:12:00 AM
May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Doc. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2010 6:43:00 AM
nice D.Cobbs... a women a book,, what a thought to write about... how are you good to see a new one from you,..p.d.
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Date: 11/28/2010 2:09:00 PM
really enjoyed this something a little different but oh so true ... sarah x have been so busy with my move but all settled in now so sarah is back :-)
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Date: 11/28/2010 1:01:00 PM
Excellent sonnet, Dakarai. I have a little sign that says, "Men Should Come with Instructions." Guess it's hard for all of us to figure out the thoughts and actions of the opposite sex. Hope you have a wonderful holiday season, Carolyn
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