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The Overseer

peregrine falcon

                                    scout upon the citadel

                                    pigeons kept in check







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Warren Doll

July 28, 2018 at 7:42 AM

Great haiku, Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 28, 2018 at 8:01 AM

Thank you Warren :) xomo

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2018 at 6:54 PM

Cool tribute to this feathered overseer.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 26, 2018 at 7:59 PM

I'm in love, can you tell? ;)

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

July 26, 2018 at 10:40 AM

Clever! Your a Great Poet!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 26, 2018 at 3:38 PM

Thank you so much Vickie! :)) xomo!

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 26, 2018 at 9:23 AM

Metaphorically is even more beautiful dearest, Maureen!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 26, 2018 at 3:38 PM

Oh thank you Demetrios! A lovely thing to say, as I do so often write with weighty metaphor, I had not considered this piece thus ;) A splendid day to you my friend! xomo <3

Robert Lindley

July 26, 2018 at 5:24 AM

LOVE IT MY GOOD FRIEND! I am a big fan of birds and especially the interesting abilities of birds of prey. A fav....

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 26, 2018 at 7:05 AM

Oh I'm thrilled you love this one my friend! As you know birds occupy much of my mind, the falcons in particular I find 'perfect' in design. Too, most of my haiku are about birds, I couldn't bring myself to be judged in the new bird haiku contest. You made my day Robert, Thank You! Hugs :) xomo!

Silent One

July 25, 2018 at 4:25 PM

Nice one... WE have a couple of these here where I live....

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 26, 2018 at 7:08 AM

Sweet! Since I quit biking I haven't been downtown much, but I used to keep tabs on a pair nesting on a high rise hotel. Even got to see them mate once! Blink and you miss it ;) Thank you SO :) xomo!