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The Outlaw Cometh

The outlaw has come to our friendly land His words are his weapons to slay and to kill I pray for him really, for he not understands But just mocks from ignorance as that is his thrill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/19/2008 2:36:00 PM
so have i seen, it is not good for the likes of peiple like him to give soup a bad name, we all must pray for this Vulture. you wrote a good one here. a lot of hate and anger is flowing on soup hope it stops soon.
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Date: 11/19/2008 1:20:00 PM
Glad you addressed this, I really couldnt figure out what was going on. Seems the soups boiling today. BG
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Date: 11/19/2008 12:56:00 PM
Thanks Michael, well said. I am sure there is a sad reason for his rudeness, but still glad you left a message for us to sign and agree with. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/19/2008 12:48:00 PM
Michael this is so true. Brought me back to thinking of a bully at school he eventually fit this kind of profile. Love your poem's will comment on more feeling a little down but Your poem's will pick me up. Micahel Torres
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Date: 11/19/2008 11:50:00 AM
Pray, Pray, that is our weapon....always, Christy
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Date: 11/19/2008 10:44:00 AM
great pen, nothing can kill faster then a mean word right to the heart! thank you and God bless
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