The Outlaw Cometh

The outlaw has come to our friendly land
His words are his weapons to slay and to kill
I pray for him really, for he not understands
But just mocks from ignorance as that is his thrill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Foulk Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 2:36 PM
so have i seen, it is not good for the likes of peiple like him to give soup a bad name, we all must pray for this Vulture. you wrote a good one here. a lot of hate and anger is flowing on soup hope it stops soon.
Gorelick Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 1:20 PM
Glad you addressed this, I really couldnt figure out what was going on. Seems the soups boiling today. BG
Winter Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 12:56 PM
Thanks Michael, well said. I am sure there is a sad reason for his rudeness, but still glad you left a message for us to sign and agree with. Love, Shar
Torres Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 12:48 PM
Michael this is so true. Brought me back to thinking of a bully at school he eventually fit this kind of profile. Love your poem's will comment on more feeling a little down but Your poem's will pick me up. Micahel Torres
Cooper Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 10:44 AM
great pen, nothing can kill faster then a mean word right to the heart! thank you and God bless
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