The outing

Retirement home museum trip to see relics under public care.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Croft Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 2:15 AM
Congratulations!
Radice Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 10:28 PM
Clever work Tom! People losing their marbles comes to mind. :) Cheers - Gary
Pickering Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 7:00 AM
:) - yes....
One Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 9:31 AM
This was a clever play on words...Congratulations on your first place in the contest
Pickering Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 7:00 AM
Thank you very much for the kind comment.
Faulkner Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 1:02 PM
My mother is in assisted living now, I feel this one, quite profound, congratulations Tom~
Lawless Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 2:15 PM
OH the irony.......
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