The Outer Island

The Outer Island 

Small Island in a summer lake
And on a day of play 
Young people were slaughtered by
A madman posing as normal.

Another summer the island is
Full of wild flowers 
Whispering trees 
A requiem for those left behind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 9:00 PM
A pleasure to read your poetry this evening Jan. I am happy I was able to read some poetry tonight and so glad yours was among the poems I am reading. Love, Carol
Hansen Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 3:44 AM
thank you Carol
Bauer Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 3:00 PM
a beautiful testament to a horrible event. nicely done!
Hansen Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 3:10 PM
dear iLene thank you... it was a difficult poem to write
Collins Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 6:58 AM
Dear Jan - A sad day in Norway. Dreadful in Aurora. love, Kathy
Hansen Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 9:41 AM
and there is little we can do
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