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The Other Side of Pain Tableau

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lantern’s rain and flame. lighting wicks the dark, butts saffron water in vase, purple flares— plucky wildflowers, other side of pane. 3/26/2021 Pic 4, Tableau 2 Sponsor: Joseph May PS syllable counter used

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Paige Hind

Date: 8/20/2024 6:34:00 PM

Wow, this is one that you can keep reading again and again! Loved it, the contrasts, everything

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2024 7:56:00 PM

Thank you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2021 12:44:00 PM

Hi, Kim, it's great seeing everyone's interpretations like this. You picked a popular picture! Congrats on the win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2024 7:56:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/1/2021 10:59:00 AM

Congratulation on you win. A wonderful lantern, rain, flame and wildflowers write. Have a blessed day and Easter..................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2021 12:33:00 PM

Happy Easter! Thank you :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/31/2021 9:53:00 PM

Great imagery, Kim, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2021 12:35:00 PM

Thank you, Eve! Happy Easter!

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2021 3:18:00 PM

Well done, Kim! I like your formatting. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2021 12:35:00 PM

Blessings to you, Kim! Thank you!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/31/2021 11:21:00 AM

Wonderfully done Kim. Nice double entendre! Unique and creative imagery. Congratulations on your win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2021 12:36:00 PM

Thank you for the “double entendre.” :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/31/2021 11:05:00 AM

Nicely done tableau, Kim:-) Congratulations on the win!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2021 12:36:00 PM

Thank you, Edward!

Joseph May

Date: 3/31/2021 5:31:00 AM

Congrats on your win Kim, Very nicely done

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/31/2021 8:19:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/28/2021 1:01:00 PM

Kim, Nice to find this Verse in perfection. A lantern riding out the perfect storm. Perfect for a Palm Sunday in reflection. -Richard

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2021 3:58:00 AM

Thank you for matching it up to Palm Sunday. God bless you, Richard!

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/27/2021 9:48:00 AM

Hi Kim, I agree with Michelle; your title drew me to your poem. Good description of the photo and much more. I found it to be poetic. It's a good contender for the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2021 3:58:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/26/2021 9:13:00 PM

The title is so compelling, I love 'rain and flame' and 'purple flares' - great twist on the last line too!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2021 3:58:00 AM

Thank you, Michelle!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/26/2021 8:37:00 PM

Lovely tableau...the first of this picture I have seen. Nice job, Kim. I predict success for you in the contest. GL!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2021 8:39:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!