The Other Side

I found Hell on the other side of you 
a moment without you
leaves me gasping for air
...but you are my air
Fill my lungs again
Come back…
I found Hell on the other side of you
I sleep on the floor because 
the bed was made for two; us
In a constant falling dream
just wishing to hit the ground
Come back…
I found Hell on the other side of you 
Every waking hour
Every second of everyday
I’m on my knees
Begging for you 
Come back…
I found Hell on the other side of you 
My pillow brings no relief
Where have you gone 
I even beg for you 
in my dreams
Come back…
I found Hell on the other side of you 
Which begs the question what did you find
on the other side of me?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Jacobs Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 5:56 PM
Amazing poem, very well written
Krutsinger Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Love the ending. And the beginning, and the middle! Hell on the other side of you. Very cool!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Wow u express in an appealing evocative way, how it was hell without the beloved. Great intense feel in regret . Kudos. plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.
Babbit Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 11:49 AM
Nicely done, what did you find on the other side?
Green Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 11:12 AM
Nicely crafted. This one spoke to me.
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