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The Other Side

I found Hell on the other side of you a moment without you leaves me gasping for air ...but you are my air Fill my lungs again Come back… I found Hell on the other side of you I sleep on the floor because the bed was made for two; us In a constant falling dream just wishing to hit the ground Come back… I found Hell on the other side of you Every waking hour Every second of everyday I’m on my knees Begging for you Come back… I found Hell on the other side of you My pillow brings no relief Where have you gone I even beg for you in my dreams Come back… I found Hell on the other side of you Which begs the question what did you find on the other side of me?

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Date: 10/28/2018 5:56:00 PM
Amazing poem, very well written
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Date: 10/16/2018 10:50:00 AM
Love the ending. And the beginning, and the middle! Hell on the other side of you. Very cool!
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Date: 10/15/2018 12:17:00 PM
Wow u express in an appealing evocative way, how it was hell without the beloved. Great intense feel in regret . Kudos. plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.
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Date: 10/15/2018 11:49:00 AM
Nicely done, what did you find on the other side?
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Date: 10/15/2018 11:12:00 AM
Nicely crafted. This one spoke to me.
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