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The Other Part of Me

You are my world. You are the axis in which my world turns. Without you I can not revolve. You put the light in my days, And the stars in my night. You are the passion that keeps my heart full. The endless infatuation that fills my head. The other half of my soul. My first. My last. My everything.

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Date: 4/12/2011 6:09:00 AM
This is a beautiful sentiment. Glad you have someone like this in your life, hope it's as true now as when you first wrote this. Congrats on being featured. Best wishes Em:)
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Date: 4/11/2011 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Christiehy. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2011 8:49:00 AM
Reminds me of Stevie Wonder who sings- you are the sunshine of my life-. Congrats on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:52:00 AM
Deat Christie, This is a tender rendering of love and adoration. Many congrats on this feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Christie
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