The Other Man

Friends have told me they
have seen the two of you together.
Laughing and running around town.
They say that she's the life
of every party she goes to.
But only when I'm not around.

They say they've seen your car
a few times in our driveway.
And they say they've seen you come and go.
I know you think you want her
and you think she wants you too.
But friend, there's something you should know.

She's not the woman
that you think you're loving.
She longs for a strangers hand.
She'll lead you on
and then she'll leave you alone.
I know 'cause once, I was the other man.

The  first time I saw her
she was sitting alone.
In a place where I used to go.
She gave me a wink
after I bought her a drink.
Ohh how was I to know?

She's not the woman
that you think you're loving
She longs for a strangers hand
She'll lead you on
and then she'll leave you alone.
I know 'cause once, I was the other man.



(Submitted for the Paula Swanson contest "Play Me A Cheatin' Song".)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/10/2011 3:48:00 PM
Enjoyed - evene the other side of love can be intesting and you say it with style.
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Date: 5/28/2011 5:17:00 PM
this was very good , congrats on your HM cory
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Date: 5/23/2011 9:55:00 PM
very nice. I've been offline for a while. But I came back and checked you out. I posted a cpl new ones too bro. checkem! ~JSLambert 7 rating
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Date: 5/23/2011 3:13:00 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Paula, Rockman
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:40:00 PM
lcongratulations on your placement with this great poem/song. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:15:00 PM
Congrats Rockman on your HM in Paula's contest with this excellent entry .. enjoy your special honor with luv..
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Rock. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:01:00 PM
Congrats, Rock. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/23/2011 9:49:00 AM
Well done, Rockman. Congratulations on your success in Paula's contest! Love, Carolyn
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