Rajagopal Kaimal Poet Rhyme

The Other Day

The other day I went to the edge;
To the edge of my big big world.
Peeked out over a mental hedge.

I saw another world and so new;
A world so wonderfully different;
A world just right for me and you.

There were extremists here, too;
Extremists of such a different kind;
All busy distributing the joy-brew.

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Poet Destroyer A February 27, 2016 at 1:08 AM Hi, Rajagopal Kaimal, i try my best... hugs. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 12:23 PM Rajagopal Kaimal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA Rajagopal Kaimal February 23, 2016 at 10:12 PM Dear Linda, Thank U so much for your pat-on-the-back remarks! Very encouraging. Regards, Kaimal

Skat A December 24, 2015 at 12:18 PM NICE POEM Rajagopal Kaimal February 23, 2016 at 10:12 PM Thank you!

Pete Yuhas December 14, 2015 at 12:03 PM Nice write Rajagopal, very nice world.