The Other 1-In Your Eyes-A Series of One Liners

I look into the reflection in your beautiful eyes and see him
12-20-16
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Duncan Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 6:37 PM
I like your one-liner :) now I must read all of them :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 7:17 PM
wow! I worked my way backwards to the first great one liner and there we have it. The EYES have it.
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February 5, 2017 at 8:03 PM
Clever Andrea. Thanks for spending time reading all of them. They are all related as part of the same theme. I once knew someone that I grew to care a great deal for and then I met her boyfriend. As she walked away she slipped her fingers between his and I had such intense and inexplicable feelings, partly guilt for desiring her and partly sadness for knowing I could never have her.
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