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The Origin of Control

No Saints were Artists…. Suckd down a portal incorrectly chosen by disbelief blah and a challenge that is ill advised plays out a lost and a soul was threatened to be taken but should counter offensive metal plight to destroy fear of all fears in itself took arms up against death and gears life by the balls claiming to be only a dream that vanished with the memory of dealt deviled hands. Only to coddle the baby elephant that a trunk double dutched children that Christopher was supposed to be heals on lazy waters river slide.... Insy Esher water slide. master math mate waterfalls of reversed illusions that senseless logic found dumbness in a smart hand holding onto his baby elephants trunk arms up against death and gears life by the balls claiming to be only a dream that vanished with the memory of dealt deviled hands. Only to coddle the baby elephant that a trunk double dutched children that Christopher was supposed to be heals on lazy waters river slide.... Insy Esher water slide. master math mate waterfalls of reversed illusions that senseless logic found dumbness in a smart hand holding onto his baby elephants trunk. Sanctified The Origin of Control Control is original. Original is control. Control is ordered. Order is controlled. Trust is belief. Belief is trust. Control is originally created by undividual conceptual belief that has been developed through full fledge secular trust. Trust is opinionated by popular belief of normalized ordered control. Trust is a belief that is truthfully (and equally) directionally perceived. Directional perception is over populating individualized trusted beliefs. (Thoughts) The way I think is… Driven towards (by) an immoralist higher archy of… Intentionally deceived belief systems that of which were soully* created for mind control. Mind control is sold by the man-(that)-we are truthfully happy* to pay top dollar for the ultrasonic receipts from electorically polling stamen autopsy of banished aborted fetus’s ultrasound mug shot—looked lesser upon from higher eyed limbs that branch out of single minded scope of periscopes battered wisps. Colors kalide when pre-scoped eyes scream four fathers lied dreams… Hidden from yourself You become hidden from LEFT EYE That’s coming out of your trust fund… Trust fun Coming funds of trusted your “that’s”, Out Out of trust Funds of trust runs outcome. Trust Outcome… (End)

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Steve Tomlin

Date: 7/10/2016 1:40:00 AM

I love this line. 'Control is originally created by undividual conceptual belief that has been developed through full fledge secular trust.' The beginning has a rich, dreamy like rhetoric that keeps on spinning round with thoughts of mixed subjects that make diffucult to understand but the flow is incredible.

Ironic Zink
Date: 7/13/2016 12:43:00 AM

One more thing; DIRECTIONAL PERCEPTION that was my most impressive (personally) part of the entire write. I felt it to be huge. A big term in itself. We are being manipulated with intention and "they" are directing our beliefs'. (auto-fill on search engines, images on screens, social media, scholastically, religiously... the list goes on...

Ironic Zink
Date: 7/13/2016 12:36:00 AM

Thanks Steve! You rule! I deleted a portion from the middle }(after sanctified and before The Origin of control) because it was a copy/past definition from an internet work cited origin. Since you are super duper I will inbox the original to you. That is, unless I fail in my attempt to do so right now.

Steve Tomlin
Date: 7/10/2016 1:40:00 AM

When first reading this i tried to understand the context of each separation of information. 1 - 'Suckd down a portal incorrectly..' Implies you are trying to explain your lost state. 2 - 'sanctified - the origin of control...' Implies you are trying to make sense of that lost state, self observing, reminding yourself by stating what control is to you and realising at a deep level its an illusion, determined by ... 3 - 'Mind control is sold by the man-(that)-we are...' Your belief that somewhere someone with greater control than you is controlling you, and you then trail off with random details about your unsatisfaction of birth, money etc... Thats how i read it. I love the flow. Rich details.