The Ordinary

Father is still up for a brawl Altercations are ongoing My mom can not tolerate my sister My sister hates me, and she says the least On the playground Mates continue to be enthusiastic about my kin They always let me scared and cry Few know nothing but to fight happily I always have the generosity of a friend Cordial and simple to go I can never fit me at home My mom is waiting to beat me and my sister is waiting to play I feel sad and bored at home I can see the tenderness in the evening before bed I enjoy sleeping because nobody dares to hurt me Hug of vanity and kisses turn out my sleepless Litan Dey You're a little kid again A boy of 3 years old

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Robin Davis

Date: 10/27/2013 9:10:00 AM

Litan This is a sad and emotionally heartfelt write. The reader can feel the pain and sorrow that's in this little boys heart. Nice job thank you for the congratulations and nice comment on my Soldier poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2013 2:45:00 PM

This is a really sad little life for a three year old boy. Gosh, I sure hope it is not based on how your childhood really was!!

Litan Dey
Date: 9/9/2013 12:04:00 AM

Yes you are right....it's not mine.But i saw many family like this and some of them were my friends.In my childhood also i face some of what written here.Thank you for your nice comments on my works....Have a good day.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/8/2013 9:51:00 AM

wow Litan, i like your style, different and well versed. a sad view from the toddler and the life he bares ... love love..Linda

Litan Dey
Date: 9/8/2013 10:31:00 AM

Thank you for your smooth visit .....Have sweet dreams!!!love love....Litan

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/8/2013 7:08:00 AM

It's interesting to think about our childhood and how it shaped us. You have the opportunity to try to change what family life you have as an adult. If you have relationships with children, I know you will make their lives much happier and break the chain that you have described here. This is one of the greatest challenges of our lives. My dad was very competitive. Always beat me at everything. Not a lot of tenderness. Fortunately, I have been able to be different.

Litan Dey
Date: 9/13/2013 10:08:00 PM

Wow!congratulation for your great job to your family.You absolutely right here....Thank you.