Litan Dey Poet Free verse

The Ordinary

Father is still up for a brawl
Altercations are ongoing 
My mom can not tolerate my sister
My sister hates me, and she says the least

On the playground
Mates continue to be enthusiastic about my kin 
They always let me scared and cry
Few know nothing but to fight happily

I always have the generosity of a friend
Cordial and simple to go 
I can never fit me at home
My mom is waiting to beat me and my sister is waiting to play

I feel sad and bored at home
I can see the tenderness in the evening before bed
I enjoy sleeping because nobody dares to hurt me 
Hug of vanity and kisses turn out my sleepless



Litan Dey
You're a little kid again
A boy of 3 years old

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Robin Davis October 27, 2013 at 9:10 AM Litan This is a sad and emotionally heartfelt write. The reader can feel the pain and sorrow that's in this little boys heart. Nice job thank you for the congratulations and nice comment on my Soldier poem.

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2013 at 2:45 PM This is a really sad little life for a three year old boy. Gosh, I sure hope it is not based on how your childhood really was!! Litan Dey September 9, 2013 at 12:04 AM Yes you are right....it's not mine.But i saw many family like this and some of them were my friends.In my childhood also i face some of what written here.Thank you for your nice comments on my works....Have a good day.

Poet Destroyer A September 8, 2013 at 9:51 AM wow Litan, i like your style, different and well versed. a sad view from the toddler and the life he bares ... love love..Linda Litan Dey September 8, 2013 at 10:31 AM Thank you for your smooth visit .....Have sweet dreams!!!love love....Litan

Duke Beaufort September 8, 2013 at 7:08 AM It's interesting to think about our childhood and how it shaped us. You have the opportunity to try to change what family life you have as an adult. If you have relationships with children, I know you will make their lives much happier and break the chain that you have described here. This is one of the greatest challenges of our lives. My dad was very competitive. Always beat me at everything. Not a lot of tenderness. Fortunately, I have been able to be different. Litan Dey September 13, 2013 at 10:08 PM Wow!congratulation for your great job to your family.You absolutely right here....Thank you.