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The Orderly

invisible in a world where rank is everything he’s reminded of it every day reminded he belongs at the bottom rung of the ladder he doesn’t get a say seldom a smile or acknowledgment he feels rejected looking the wrong way he’s reminded each day it’s the patients who appreciate a kindness a word a smile and return in kind AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Date: 7/17/2019 6:56:00 PM
That's right. If he/she is willing to do the job with a bit of flair, with courtesy and decency, the rewards will be greater than expected. People notice... promotions eventually come. Well-penned, Line :) gw
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Date: 7/17/2019 8:07:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 7/17/2019 4:48:00 AM
He has the opportunity to show love... that's orderly's blessings...
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Date: 7/17/2019 5:29:00 AM
He certainly does have an important role. Thanks for your visit and comment, Arturo.
Date: 7/16/2019 9:17:00 PM
So TRUE!
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Date: 7/16/2019 9:48:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.

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