The Order of Pisces

His mind is still like a smooth, glassy pond
empty and silent in the eternal present
devoid of thought
devoid of emotion
Waves cradle and caress, soothing his restless soul
Mother Nature has found her lost child
Mother Nature is rocking her baby to sleep...

The sea is calling
calling him home
home to his beginnings
home to his heart
to his roots, his core
to his origin...

He is enchanted by the waters
He needs, he craves the waters
He is the waters...

By: tryerson
Motif: Nature
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mehta Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 7:32 AM
Wonderful piece of a poem, congrats on the win, tim
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 7:50 PM
tim well our poems are kind of low on that list, but I am sure impressed by this one!! Congrats for the win. Always love seeing you show up on a winner list! Are you Pisces? I love how you made this about water, so important to that sign of the zodiac.
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 7:29 PM
Winner List: Impress me III! (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio V. are posted and I will: Congratulate you with your winning poem,Tim !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Jones Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 12:49 PM
Waves cradle and caress...beautiful
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