The Orchard

The orchard had a racket
With some autumn fruit to pick – 
A pumpkin or some apples
But it wouldn’t be too quick…

For the parking lot on Saturday
Was filled with family groups
And to get to where the orchard was
You had to jump through hoops.

The lines were long for everything – 
The picking trees and store
And bakery and port-a-potties;
Plus, just one thing more…

The temps were not quite fall-like.
It was sunny and so hot
That if you think it was fun
I must assure you it was not.

Still, the kids ran up and down a hill
And climbed the hay-bale pile,
Enough to make us almost feel
The trip was worth our while.

We left and cranked the car’s AC
To max and headed back,
But first – lunch at the diner,
Just to get us back on track.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hinshaw Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 10:51 AM
Another wonderful write from your very talented quill, Ilene, but sounded like you had a frustrating day! Great to hear from you - it's been awhile. Glad you enjoyed the Old Retired Guys write. I'll try to keep "twaddling" along and hope I can come up with some more stuff. PS: snow expected here tonite! Bob
Bauer Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 2:47 PM
hey bob! so nice to hear from you, too! i always look forward to reading your work (with or without a side of taters!). wow - snow already! it was 80 degrees here yesterday, which i was not happy about. i'm ready for fall weather (but not snow!)...
Manassian Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 2:07 AM
:) I'm with Arthur on this one. Smiles all around. Stopping at the diner I'm sure helped. Hugs, dear
Bauer Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 2:45 PM
hey eileen! good to hear from you! yes, the diner kind of revived all of our spirits...
Vaso Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 8:44 PM
It may not have been fun, but the poem sure gave me a smile!! :)
Bauer Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 2:44 PM
thank you, arthur! i appreciate the comment...
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