The Opening

I opened my eyes
and found you there;
I opened my heart
and found your love;
I opened my soul
and found you enhanced it;
I opened my world
and found you changed it.

You opened me up
to a life I never knew -
my eyes, my heart,
my soul, my world...
will never close on you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 5:24 AM
thankxx George for your encouraging remarks on my contest entry luv... give it a try too.. it is a challenging form luv..
Haick Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 2:46 PM
Beautiful words to present to your lady, George! Thanks for the comments. Always, Annalise
Sweetheart Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 12:39 PM
A special person can cause this type of rare emotion George.. if u have found it u have a tresure to cherish.. I know I have.. enjoyed my friend with such luv..
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