The Opal


The opal’s not like other stones,
her polish more satin than shine,
her colors mixed and muted tones 
but look closer, within you’ll find--
there’s lightning coursing in her veins 
and fire burning at her core.
She hints of blue skies above the rain,
turquoise calm though the seas may roar,
of blazing sunrise and sunset.
She speaks of passion veiled in lace,
of secrets kept without regret
and fragile things you can’t replace.

Oh, may you keep her safe from harm
and ever wonder at her charms.


5/14/2019
Tribute to a Precious or Semi-Precious Gem Poetry Contest
Line Gauthier, Sponsor
First Place
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Moss Avatar
March 15, 2020 at 12:53 AM
I hope this is not too sappy, but, here goes: I found an opal in mountain pass/I purchased it for my love lass/Its wondrous beauty deep within/Is captured here with your prose pen.--Nicely written and inspiring; reminded me of the opal I bought for my girl on our road trip last summer:)
Awtry Avatar
March 15, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Thank you very much :)
Ashley Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 9:22 PM
Ah, the opal's precious passion, in all is fiery and charming hues, is expressed with elegance in your exquisite poem, P.S. Indeed, a poetic beauty, my friend. Warmest wishes always, dear poetess.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 9:10 PM
Indeed, I can see that their magic and beauty truly inspires you, dear poetess :)
Awtry Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 1:56 PM
Thank you Susan. Opals are very special to me. :)
Green Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 12:41 PM
I loved this and can easily see why it landed in the winning treasure chest. Beautifully done.
Awtry Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 12:11 AM
Thank you so much Chris for reading and commenting. I am so glad you liked it :) ~ps
Kiser Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 2:09 PM
"Fav'd"; Opal is my birthstone and I couldn't pass up a chance to put this on my list. Beautiful!
Awtry Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 4:17 PM
Thank you ML! It's mine, too :) ~ps
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 12:26 PM
Very nice! Opal is my birthstone! Congrats on first place!
Awtry Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 1:41 PM
Thank you Kim. It’s my birthstone too
Wood Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 9:37 AM
Oh, this is truly beautiful and it does the Opal justice. So well done!
Awtry Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 1:40 PM
Thank you Dean very much
Agustin Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 8:45 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
Awtry Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 1:38 PM
Thank you Beata :) ps
Haight Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 5:02 PM
Such a beautifully written tribute poem to the Opal, P.S., as well providing us so many details about this lovely gem. Congratulations on your First Place podium win! Hugs, Sandra
Awtry Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 8:35 PM
Thank you so much Sandra :) ps
Allison Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 5:55 PM
what a super tribute to this glorious gem:-) hugs Jan xx
Awtry Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Thank You Jan :)
Romios Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 9:21 AM
You are beyond incredible, do you know that! Creative to the Max Opal lover, Panagiota
Awtry Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 5:35 PM
Panagiota you are a doll! Thank you so very much! I love opals!
Gilmour Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 8:21 AM
Many congrats PS on your beautiful win ! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Awtry Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 5:23 PM
Thank you so very much Ann :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 12:26 AM
I am so very HAPPY to see this exquisite poem win the Trophy P.S. You already know I Faved it and if it were my contest it would be in the same top spot! Congratulations on your MOST deserving win! xxoo : )
Awtry Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 5:45 AM
Thank you Connie for your enthusiastic support for this poem! I am very honored by its placement in the contest and also by the encouraging comments like yours :) -ps
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 11:06 PM
Gorgeous! A winning poem indeed! Congratulations! xomo :)
Awtry Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 11:07 PM
Thank you! This made my evening :)
Faulkner Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 10:54 PM
I see we both chose opal! This is exquisite, many congratulations!
Awtry Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 10:56 PM
It is my birthstone and my favorite gem. Thank you so much :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 10:21 PM
Congratulations for top spot in the contest, Aloha William
Awtry Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 10:23 PM
Thank you William for the congrats! I am delighted! :)
Sergi Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Eloquently done, P.S. This is definitely a first placer!
Awtry Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 7:39 PM
Thank you so very much Ralph.... we shall see :). -ps
Wolf Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 10:20 PM
This is terrific. Get ready to receive the 'blue ribbon.' And the envelope, please... ~ gw
Awtry Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 10:32 PM
you were right! thank you for the congrats! This is my first unshared first place... so I am very tickled :)
Wolf Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 9:39 PM
No, I'm not, as you see: I was just being truthful, calling them as I see them. (If I have a virtue to my name, that's it: Relentless honesty). Congratulations are truly in order here for your #1 top finish! ~ gw
Awtry Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 10:14 AM
aw shucks, you're too kind. Thank you :) ~ps
Mcguire Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 9:43 PM
Great poem, reminds me of my mother who loved opals, thank you
Awtry Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 10:12 AM
thank you for this beautiful comment Timothy. :) ~ps
Leffanta Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 2:35 PM
I see you know your opals! A fitting tribute indeed! If you ever encounter one encased in 18k gold with French engraving on the reverse side ending in 08.X.66, it was stolen from my late wife. Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
Awtry Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 2:39 PM
Thank you Rico! I had one years ago that eventually cracked... I’ve had others, but none I found more beautiful.
Onclaud Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 1:25 PM
ohh, so finely crafted i need a second dose of this poem, PS... huggs
Awtry Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 1:30 PM
Thank you Nette :) ~ps
Flater Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 12:08 PM
Swetha, said it best. "This is a GEM :)" Noel from NoelsArt
Awtry Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Thank you very much! Glad you liked it!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Nice bouncy flow to it, beautiful, Aloha wk
Awtry Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:54 AM
Thank you, William :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:01 AM
I absolutely love this! With exquisite creativity you have captured the wonder and fire of the Opal. Into my Faves! I hope this is a big winner for you P.S. : ) xxoo
Awtry Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:04 AM
Thank you Connie! I am so glad you liked it and honored by the FAV :). -ps
Pandit Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:38 AM
A precious poem your wrote PSA...all the best.
Awtry Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Thank you very much Vijay :) -ps
Smith Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 4:26 AM
Excellent P.S. much enjoyed. :)
Awtry Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Thank you Gary :) -ps
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