Madelin Barton Poet Free verse

The Onset of Crestfallen Poetry

Stifled tears
Recorded in
The pages of
An old diary
Made immortal
In the hearts of
Kindred souls
Awakened
By the dawns of
Early light
Cradled thoughts
Luminous indeed
A way for the soul to
Release its many burdens of
Life and lost love

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Karen Anglesey September 12, 2013 at 6:46 AM Very creative. You describe the theme perfectly.. love the title :) Madelin Barton September 13, 2013 at 10:33 AM thank you Karen for commenting on my poetry ;) ~Maddie

Liam Mcdaid September 11, 2013 at 2:18 PM VERY BEAUTIFULLY PENNED HEARTFELT SWEET

Ken Carroll September 11, 2013 at 2:11 PM Hi Madelin, A well crafted lovely emotional write. Ken

Dan Kearley September 11, 2013 at 2:09 PM Oh sooooo true... Nice to see you again. :o) Madelin Barton September 13, 2013 at 10:32 AM thanks Dan ~Maddie

Samuel Robinson September 10, 2013 at 1:31 PM I'm a fan of the word "crestfallen". It's heavy!

Poet Destroyer A September 10, 2013 at 9:56 AM Medelin, a deep write...Linda Madelin Barton September 10, 2013 at 10:24 AM Thank you Linda It's funny that I can only write when my moods are low, I have no idea why but I love to laugh but most of my poetry is about sorrow and yet it's not always about me it's about what I've seen others go through