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The Only Star For Me

Darling, please tell me you remember the night we first spent beneath fall’s moon. Although daylight lingered, there soon shone the star of our first September! It twinkled in the sky prettily as if it smiled down on us that night. Old and gray now are we. That’s all right, for you're still the only star for me. Nov. 9, 2022 N/A in Contest of the Same Title For Brian Strand's Second Chance For Your N-A Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/3/2023 10:28:00 AM
What a lovely and very romantic poem of new love beneath the stars and love that has matured beneath the same stars! Congratulations on your win. Happy New Year! Blessings beneath the stars.
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Date: 12/21/2022 2:56:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/21/2022 5:52:00 PM
Hi Andrea, This is a beautiful poem of enduring quality. Lovely descriptions. Thank you so much for my winning placement in recent contest which I really appreciate. Howard
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Date: 11/11/2022 10:56:00 PM
Thoughtful and evocative writing Hit upon; my awareness like lightning' Age making our days more dim The years concur so lined with sin' Yet the stars that have shone Still hold out in memory strong
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Date: 11/9/2022 4:18:00 PM
Very romantic are you, I see. A star to share twix he and thee. I liked it, good luck in the contest my friend! Bill
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Date: 11/9/2022 4:17:00 PM
Romantic!
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Date: 11/9/2022 1:44:00 PM
Ahh!! The September star is the only one for you. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara
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Date: 11/9/2022 1:14:00 PM
Such a romantic, lovely poem.
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Date: 11/9/2022 1:02:00 PM
So sweet and romantic. Enjoyed the poem, Andrea. Best to you.
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