Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

The Only Place To Be

We crossed streets that were never paved...
                               Signs for direction I saw and just waved...
                                 I peeked my head up over the skyline...
                 There I saw a view of colors and rivers that flowed with wine...
                       Where ageless dreams run through minds not hollow...
                           A sky with a moon that the clouds don't swallow...
                          The music is soothing and filled with tender peace...
                              A place where we love as much as we please...
                               If one day you feel your in a place not fair...
                     Just come to my place where there is only love and care...

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Dinda Minardi November 20, 2011 at 9:56 AM Heavenly place you got here... The tender and sweetness of the descriptions soothing my soul. Greatly written, Michael.

Lizzie Treetop November 19, 2011 at 9:29 PM Descriptive lovely words reaching out to all! LT

Tracy Edwards November 18, 2011 at 3:29 PM Ill have a one way ticket Michael...it sounds amazing. Nice write x0x Michael J. Falotico November 18, 2011 at 3:37 PM Always have a place for you Tracie oxo

Elizabeth Wesley November 17, 2011 at 6:50 PM Sounds heavenly, just the place to come, my bags a packed. The dreamlike sequence is so special.

November 16, 2011 at 5:36 PM A lovely write Michael, enjoyed reading and congratulations on getting your book published wish you all the best with it. Love Alexa

M.I.A . November 16, 2011 at 1:14 AM aaawww, would love to! beautiful you indeed. thank you for taking the time to stop by and comment on my poem Michael. best wishes always.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 15, 2011 at 6:57 PM a loving invitation Michael luv and sweetly penned with deepest emotion of heart.. wish I could type more..but want to read your other creations catching up.. ouch..but worth it.. appreciate the luv across the GW.. back at ya..my muse.. J.G. in boo boo mode..oh..xoxo..

Russell Sivey November 15, 2011 at 4:39 PM This is a great poem, Michael! I love the peace and calm that you have created within this write! Very well stated, and described!! Incredible work!!