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The One Who Survives

he waits nonchalantly drumming his long fingers impatiently......he waits in vain plane down
Penned 8/2/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/9/2016 3:38:00 PM
this is fantastic poem, but Seren check the form out. I think last line can only be two syllables. hurry becuase I want to see this on her winner list. I am sure it can be revised.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/10/2016 12:09:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. Did this early hours of morning didn't read it properly. Have corrected it. Hope this works.
Date: 2/9/2016 6:39:00 AM
now, that is something!....great!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/10/2016 12:11:00 AM
Thank you Sarah....Seren
Date: 2/9/2016 5:42:00 AM
Fantastic....loved it.....
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/10/2016 12:10:00 AM
Thanks Judy..... seren

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