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The One Who Survives

he waits
nonchalantly
drumming his long fingers
impatiently......he waits in vain
plane down


Penned 8/2/2016

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Andrea Dietrich

February 9, 2016 at 3:38 PM

this is fantastic poem, but Seren check the form out. I think last line can only be two syllables. hurry becuase I want to see this on her winner list. I am sure it can be revised.

Seren Roberts

February 10, 2016 at 12:09 AM

Thanks Andrea. Did this early hours of morning didn't read it properly. Have corrected it. Hope this works.