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The One Who Got Away

Stillness, Strong A dark ocean of thought Too deep to swim But still I ponder at The ripples of my reflection Trying to see what he sees View the world through his eyes View me through his heart But I can’t unmask the disguise I can’t uncover the volume Of thought that he hides Hand out saying “Come on. Let’s take this grand life for a ride.” But he hesitates to reach And just before he does He leans back on his feet And turns away from me To his obligations Heartbroken, I smile And wait in hesitation Before I drop my hand To my side, empty Empty as my heart Hide the tears inside Smile and depart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/22/2012 7:41:00 PM
Broken relationships are fodder for the poet's pen. You painted well the picture written by your talented pen. Nice Job... I will visit more..... Jake
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Date: 9/9/2012 9:41:00 PM
great write Brandi,,,, there's a song called Brandi by Looking Glass, if you don't already know that? ;},,,,, is this a true story I wonder,,,, you have a great day .
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 10/11/2012 8:55:00 PM
Thanks, Debbie. This is a true story.
Date: 7/11/2012 8:53:00 PM
wow wonderful write Brandi ,not meant to be
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 7/11/2012 8:56:00 PM
Thank you, Richard... and true =)
Date: 7/11/2012 5:56:00 AM
A heartfelt welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Brandi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 07/11/2012
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 7/11/2012 8:49:00 PM
Thank you very much, Carol! I'm already enjoying the poems on this site and I'm very happy to be here.
Date: 7/10/2012 12:31:00 PM
‡ Brandi, What A Beautiful Name That Is * Yet Even Its Loveliness Pales Unto This, Your Beautiful Picture * This Is A Curious Verse ? Cast Us Into This Sea Of Love So Vast * Swimming Towards Its Blue Made Shores * Stars At Night Which Beckon Waves * Crashing Still This Love We Crave * Thank You For Your Beautiful Visit, My Luv, Rachel ‡
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 7/11/2012 8:47:00 PM
Rachel, I love your feedback. It's always so poetic. =)
Date: 7/10/2012 11:41:00 AM
Brandi, just another one of life's little tests..I like it..David
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 7/11/2012 8:46:00 PM
Thank you, David! =)

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