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The One I Saw In My Dreams

I was told that love isn’t based on time Love is based on how a person makes you feel When I am with you I feel that it is only us I feel that you can rescue me from the darkness When I am with you I feel safe no longer scared Even when we are apart I still feel that you’re here When I am with you I can't stop my smile I knew what it was from the start Just to see you I walked six miles You shot an arrow straight in my heart I’ll be here for you night and day But even if I miss you I won't show I’m weak Even if you hear the stutter in my speech I’ll brush it off like I always do Until the next time I see you I will be true I’ll love you till the sun won't shine No matter what I’ll be your best friend And I'll always be here till the end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/7/2009 8:41:00 AM
This is a wonderful write, a well deserved feature of this week. This piece is awesome and you such a creative poet too. Keep writing. Adeleke
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Date: 8/3/2009 12:48:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 8/3/2009 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week Stacy . Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 10:19:00 AM
Intense love, infatuation, and absolute yearning for your counterpart....EXCELLENT write......:JP]
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:33:00 AM
Stacy I would reckon that makes him a very lucky feller hon - wonderful poem congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/3/2009 4:30:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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Date: 4/14/2009 1:48:00 PM
i nevre read this one but it is beautiful i really like this one
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