The One I Saw In My Dreams

I was told that love isn’t based on time
Love is based on how a person makes you feel
When I am with you I feel that it is only us
I feel that you can rescue me from the darkness
When I am with you I feel safe no longer scared
Even when we are apart I still feel that you’re here
When I am with you I can't stop my smile
I knew what it was from the start
Just to see you I walked six miles
You shot an arrow straight in my heart
I’ll be here for you night and day
But even if I miss you I won't show I’m weak
Even if you hear the stutter in my speech
I’ll brush it off like I always do
Until the next time I see you I will be true
I’ll love you till the sun won't shine
No matter what I’ll be your best friend 
And I'll always be here till the end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Adeite Avatar
August 7, 2009 at 8:41 AM
This is a wonderful write, a well deserved feature of this week. This piece is awesome and you such a creative poet too. Keep writing. Adeleke
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August 3, 2009 at 12:48 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
Brown Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week Stacy . Love, Carol
Pickett Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 10:19 AM
Intense love, infatuation, and absolute yearning for your counterpart....EXCELLENT write......:JP]
Jordan Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 8:33 AM
Stacy I would reckon that makes him a very lucky feller hon - wonderful poem congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ
Fraser Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 4:30 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
Murphy Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 1:48 PM
i nevre read this one but it is beautiful i really like this one
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