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The One

You are an amazing shining star Your dedication and dreaming will carry you far What is it about you? You don't know why? It's how the sun reflects and twinkles in your chestnut eyes It's how your lips slightly curl when you flash a cunning grin It's how you radiate energy and are built to win It's in the robust and brawniness of your voice It's how you trudge through the darkness still making the right choice It's in the aptness of your mind Further proving you are one of a kind Fascinating, dexterous, attractive, and adept You stole my breath and off my feet I was swept Against you, competition there is certainly none In a class by yourself, you are certainly the one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/4/2012 9:17:00 AM
Very nicely done rhymes. Thanks for reading my poems and welcome to the soup.
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Date: 4/30/2012 2:43:00 PM
i enjoyed reading this..good work
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Date: 4/28/2012 4:11:00 AM
Ummm..I see you are already taken!!! Dang it...lol!!! Very very nice poem you wrote here Gianna...hugs
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Date: 4/27/2012 11:29:00 PM
very touching poem dear poet!!!
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