The One

You are an amazing shining star
Your dedication and dreaming will carry you far
What is it about you? You don't know why?
It's how the sun reflects and twinkles in your chestnut eyes
It's how your lips slightly curl when you flash a cunning grin
It's how you radiate energy and are built to win
It's in the robust and brawniness of your voice
It's how you trudge through the darkness still making the right choice
It's in the aptness of your mind
Further proving you are one of a kind
Fascinating, dexterous, attractive, and adept
You stole my breath and off my feet I was swept
Against you, competition there is certainly none
In a class by yourself, you are certainly the one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Grisetti Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 9:17 AM
Very nicely done rhymes. Thanks for reading my poems and welcome to the soup.
Ekpemandu Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 2:43 PM
i enjoyed reading this..good work
Ink-U-Script Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 4:11 AM
Ummm..I see you are already taken!!! Dang it...lol!!! Very very nice poem you wrote here Gianna...hugs
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 11:29 PM
very touching poem dear poet!!!
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