The One

My urges take control of me But I repel from expressing true feeling I lay awake on a sleepless night Dreaming of forever completion with a female People my age tend to take whatever comes to them And end up with players and loose blondes But I know what I want And my life is like an endless search for it Which I am willing to devote myself to Even If I die with the burden of my virginity My friends say I lack taste in women But in reality they are the ones without taste I'll find the one someday The one that stands out from the crowd And believe me It will be a beautiful moment And I will treasure her forever But is that really long enough...?
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September 8, 2026 at 7:45 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 7:47 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 28, 2016 at 1:34 PM
tyrone, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
A  Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 3:09 PM
TYRONE, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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December 22, 2011 at 9:34 PM
How very honest and true you are! Excellent piece of poetry from your heart. You will find her soon if you haven't already! Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work! Always, Laura
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