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The Oncoming Rain

Good morning my Sweetheart
Although you’ve got nothing to gain
Your love is as pure as the imminent oncoming rain
Wipe sleep from your wakening eyes
And prepare for the oncoming day
With needles and diets and timetables
No respite nor no time to delay
 
From pains in your tummy
And bloods taken throughout the night
I wonder at all how you manage to love me in spite
Of the pains you go through
You’ve a heart brimming so full of love
No remorse nor self pity
You’re my Princess my Angel my Dove
 
Though life can be cruel
And at times it can seem so unfair
The tolls that we pay and the burdens oft’ too great to bear
I’d lay down my life 
And all that I’ve left that’s worth giving
To grant you a wish and afford you 
A life that’s worth living
 
For my little Princess …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/20/2014 4:25:00 PM
This is such a sweet dedication to a very special person. Great inspiration, and you've expressed yourself very well. Thanks for reading my work by the way. Edgar Allen Poe is one of my favorite writers as well. Yesterday was his birthday! I dedicated a poem to him a while back called Unremitting Dreams. Hope you have a great week and keep up the excellent work. Always, Laura
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Peter Walsh
Date: 1/20/2014 4:59:00 PM
Aha ....i felt it as well seen it in your work Laura....I am a lifelong fan of Kris Kristofferson as well and people say they can see his influence on my writing ....have a great week too sunshine .....Breidenthal is an usual name....
Date: 1/16/2014 4:53:00 AM
wrote this one for my little girl Aoibha after she was diagnosed with type 1 diabetes...
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