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The Once Mighty Sun

Broken hearts begged light to brighten broken hearts, the frozen and forlorn beckoned despairingly for warmth, solace, and begging was answered, at last. Unforgiving and radiant he always came back from behind mournful cover at some place and time, unexpected, to caress the land, or devour it. Scorched and fevered seekers lined the sands, the sands baked, not yet complacent, his sacred face would not be directly seen. 20th July 2018

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Date: 7/23/2018 9:47:00 AM
An enjoyable read.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/11/2018 2:35:00 AM
Thank you, yours to enjoy.
Date: 7/21/2018 3:08:00 AM
Lawrence, I look forward to your writes. They are somewhat deep and philosophical.. they always leave me in a muse long after the read. This one is especially so.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/21/2018 4:38:00 AM
Thanks LM, a little humbling coming from you.
Date: 7/20/2018 7:19:00 PM
Had to read this one too, and it was equally creative. I enjoy your style and expression.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/21/2018 4:37:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/20/2018 11:49:00 AM
You have captured so much philosophy and wisdom into a few lines. Well done, Emile.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/20/2018 12:25:00 PM
Thank you very much Emile, written for those like-minded.
Date: 7/20/2018 8:48:00 AM
Excellent write sir!! TAH
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/20/2018 9:17:00 AM
Thanks a ton.

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