The Once Mighty Sun

Broken hearts
begged light to brighten broken hearts,
the frozen and forlorn
beckoned despairingly for warmth, solace,
and begging was answered, at last.
Unforgiving and radiant
he always came back
from behind mournful cover
at some place and time, unexpected,
to caress the land, or devour it.
Scorched and fevered
seekers lined the sands,
the sands baked, not yet complacent,
his sacred face
would not be directly seen.

20th July 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/23/2018 9:47:00 AM
An enjoyable read.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/11/2018 2:35:00 AM
Thank you, yours to enjoy.
Date: 7/21/2018 3:08:00 AM
Lawrence, I look forward to your writes. They are somewhat deep and philosophical.. they always leave me in a muse long after the read. This one is especially so.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/21/2018 4:38:00 AM
Thanks LM, a little humbling coming from you.
Date: 7/20/2018 7:19:00 PM
Had to read this one too, and it was equally creative. I enjoy your style and expression.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/21/2018 4:37:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/20/2018 11:49:00 AM
You have captured so much philosophy and wisdom into a few lines. Well done, Emile.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/20/2018 12:25:00 PM
Thank you very much Emile, written for those like-minded.
Date: 7/20/2018 8:48:00 AM
Excellent write sir!! TAH
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/20/2018 9:17:00 AM
Thanks a ton.
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