The Once Mighty Sun

Broken hearts
begged light to brighten broken hearts,
the frozen and forlorn
beckoned despairingly for warmth, solace,
and begging was answered, at last.
Unforgiving and radiant
he always came back
from behind mournful cover
at some place and time, unexpected,
to caress the land, or devour it.
Scorched and fevered
seekers lined the sands,
the sands baked, not yet complacent,
his sacred face
would not be directly seen.

20th July 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lamoureux Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 9:47 AM
An enjoyable read.
Sharp Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 2:35 AM
Thank you, yours to enjoy.
Man Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 3:08 AM
Lawrence, I look forward to your writes. They are somewhat deep and philosophical.. they always leave me in a muse long after the read. This one is especially so.
Sharp Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 4:38 AM
Thanks LM, a little humbling coming from you.
Peterson Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Had to read this one too, and it was equally creative. I enjoy your style and expression.
Sharp Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 4:37 AM
Thank you very much.
Pinet Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 11:49 AM
You have captured so much philosophy and wisdom into a few lines. Well done, Emile.
Sharp Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 12:25 PM
Thank you very much Emile, written for those like-minded.
Hill Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 8:48 AM
Excellent write sir!! TAH
Sharp Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 9:17 AM
Thanks a ton.
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