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The Olive Branch

i crawled beyond
the calm tranquil 
findings of deaths era
beckoning my soul 
throughout the cravings 
of life's scores
a sudden awakening naught

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/7/2011 8:27:00 AM
An interesting, if rather puzzling, piece. I'm not sure I understood it all...
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Date: 5/7/2011 8:12:00 AM
very nice form and words plaaced nicely...
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