The Old Rocking Chair

The old rocking chair is still the same, even after its retirement,only location varies



Dedicated to my grandma.A 84 year old brave lady.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 3:50 AM
- A very well done, monoku line ... I hope you won in the contest, Supraja - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 3:43 PM
oh that is clever. Yes, the rocker may retire with the person who takes it elsewhere!!
White Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 10:49 AM
Ooohh, I really like your monoku. Good luck!
Green Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Really nice. I liked how this felt to read.
Gupta Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Very true ... Well said ...
Trifiatis Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 5:36 AM
With memories like these the old rocking chair forever precious will remain dearest, Supraja!
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