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The Old Red Barn and I

The first time I painted the old red barn I was twenty years old and the skies were blue. There it sat in the middle of the hay field Waiting to be immortalized on canvas. The second time I painted the old red barn I was thirty-nine and my life was in turbulence. The fall thunderclouds predominated the picture. The hayfield almost orange with the coming sunset. The last time I took my easel to the field The barn had faded to a dusty rose colour, But the skies were blue and the clouds were fluffy. The hay waved joyously in the breeze. The barn and I had both aged and faded with time But we were still blessed with the sun shining on the hay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/13/2010 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Francine in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2010 9:12:00 PM
Many congratulations for this super write and win.
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Date: 12/12/2010 6:38:00 AM
Francine, I just love this piece for Rick's contest. Many congratulations on your win, this little beauty is heading to my favs. Have a wonderful Sunday >> James :)
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Date: 12/11/2010 4:44:00 PM
wow, Francine, so descriptive this one is. And I love how you showed it remaining beautiful with age, just like you , the painter of it. Congratulations on a great win in this contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/11/2010 9:45:00 AM
The barn and I had both aged and faded with time. Congratulations Francine on your worthy poem's honor. Yes things do fade with time, but love continues. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/11/2010 6:07:00 AM
Congrats Francine on your big win in Rick's contest with this elegant write and win my friend.. enjoy another sweet success and victory with luv..
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Date: 12/11/2010 4:55:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Red barn
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:29:00 PM
This is lovely Francine, age as not stopped your gracious pen. congrats on this winner. Harry.
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:25:00 PM
I like the way you describe how this barn has aged as you grew older and painted it. Beautiful poem, Francine. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/4/2010 3:56:00 PM
Francene, I love your way of writing. It is like you have taken a paint brush and have given us a picture with each line you write......This is lovely and I am happy to have read it....... Thank you, Shar
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Date: 10/4/2010 11:51:00 AM
Enjoyed your view of the phases of life...I like the last part best..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the kind and humorous comments on my work I needed that today..Sara
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Date: 10/4/2010 10:52:00 AM
Great word picture, Francine. Excellent. Enjoyed. Thanks for reading my silliness. xxxRalph
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