The Old Red Barn and I

The first time I painted the old red barn

I was twenty years old and the skies were blue.


There it sat in the middle of the hay field

Waiting to be immortalized on canvas.


The second time I painted the old red barn

I was thirty-nine and my life was in turbulence.


The fall thunderclouds predominated the picture.

The hayfield almost orange with the coming sunset.


The last time I took my easel to the field

The barn had faded to a dusty rose colour,


But the skies were blue and the clouds were fluffy.

The hay waved joyously in the breeze.


The barn and I had both aged and faded with time

But we were still blessed with the sun shining on the hay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations on your win Francine in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 9:12 PM
Many congratulations for this super write and win.
Fraser Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 6:38 AM
Francine, I just love this piece for Rick's contest. Many congratulations on your win, this little beauty is heading to my favs. Have a wonderful Sunday >> James :)
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December 11, 2010 at 4:44 PM
wow, Francine, so descriptive this one is. And I love how you showed it remaining beautiful with age, just like you , the painter of it. Congratulations on a great win in this contest. LUv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 9:45 AM
The barn and I had both aged and faded with time. Congratulations Francine on your worthy poem's honor. Yes things do fade with time, but love continues. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 6:07 AM
Congrats Francine on your big win in Rick's contest with this elegant write and win my friend.. enjoy another sweet success and victory with luv..
Mehta Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 4:55 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Red barn
Horsman Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 11:29 PM
This is lovely Francine, age as not stopped your gracious pen. congrats on this winner. Harry.
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December 10, 2010 at 11:25 PM
I like the way you describe how this barn has aged as you grew older and painted it. Beautiful poem, Francine. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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October 4, 2010 at 3:56 PM
Francene, I love your way of writing. It is like you have taken a paint brush and have given us a picture with each line you write......This is lovely and I am happy to have read it....... Thank you, Shar
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 11:51 AM
Enjoyed your view of the phases of life...I like the last part best..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the kind and humorous comments on my work I needed that today..Sara
Taylor Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Great word picture, Francine. Excellent. Enjoyed. Thanks for reading my silliness. xxxRalph
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