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[This poem was written sometime in 1968. It first appeared in my anthology, The Lady in the Pink Hat, Candor Press, 1969.]

The Old Red Barn

The old red barn once stood proud
Against the storm, paying
Its own way with the Mail Pouch
Sign, brimming with hay
It staved winter's starving chill
A vanguard of stubborn will.
But now the storms have racked
The bones and flailed the bloody flesh
Torn away the shingles and
Raked across the giant yellow letters,
Letting in the cold and bitter air
Left the rubble for the vacant stare.
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Krutsinger Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 6:47 AM
I like how you have personified this barn! "But now the storms have racked The bones and flailed the bloody flesh Torn away the shingles and Raked across the giant yellow letters,"
Hankins Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 7:27 AM
Thanks, Caren. We have these barns all over WV and KY. Some are eyesores, but many are kept up and bear mail pouch signs.
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 12:49 PM
wow you are such an accomplished poet Milton and this poem is proof of your talent, i have only been writing since 2013,:-) hugs Jan xx
Hankins Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 2:14 PM
Oh my goodness, Jan. Length of time writing doesn't make you any better, it just means you been learning for a long, long time. I've been writing since I was a kid. Thanks for your sweet, kind, and thoughtful remarks.
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