The Old Rat Race

They don't call it the old rat race ~ on account of its furious pace

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/14/2020 2:05:00 AM

Oh, my goodness. You have nailed this.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/14/2020 4:00:00 PM

Ha, ha! ~ Mr. Hammer

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/10/2020 12:05:00 PM

I love this write clever connection to rats and virus - rats are filth and the virus the thief in the night the grim reaper employed by the devil himself! Blessings, my friend, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/10/2020 1:06:00 PM

YOU made the connect'on, Jen. Good for you! Eye d'dn't see 't at all. :) gw

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/9/2020 11:10:00 PM

I always thought it was about wallowing in the sleaze and filth with the rats?

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/9/2020 11:28:00 PM

There you go... but one can only wallow so fast! :) gw