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The Old Man Recalls

Night closes in there in the streets
Rushing upon the tar two boys
Racing their bicycles
To defeat 

Fearlessly weaving near the cars
Freedom is a feeling
A moment in time
Carefree and one handed on the bar 

He looked on them remembering,
Himself at that stage 
So long ago its seems, 
life turned that page 

Where the youthful minds, 
carry unthinkable dreams 
And so we grow older 
And life unwinds 

Or maybe we forgot 
He felt a rush of laughter and envy while he watched 
No protection on their heads 
As they faded from the parting shot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/14/2008 4:08:00 PM
That might be what's wrong with me. Too many games without a helmet. THose childhood days are special to each of us. This one catches a moment. An exceptional write. Vince
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Date: 9/12/2008 6:49:00 PM
nice one! Well done..
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Date: 9/10/2008 3:50:00 PM
it's always nice to remember childhood times, some of the best, well done, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/9/2008 2:09:00 PM
Absolutely superb and so well written. Especially love the second verse. It's sad that in growing up we lose that spirit and sense of adventure. So very well done on this one. Love Heidie
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Date: 9/9/2008 8:17:00 AM
Yes...those were carefree times. Never worried about the future or consequences....Oh...to only have that kind of feedom of spirit again!! Well done, Laura!...~Carrie
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Date: 9/9/2008 6:22:00 AM
And it sure seems to go faster and faster, the older we get. A beautiful poem Laura. Could see and feel the freedom, joy and innocence of those two boys. Awesome write. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/9/2008 3:50:00 AM
Awesome and sad poem, happy and sad - well done...time is fleeting...that is for sure...Kristin
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Date: 9/8/2008 8:07:00 PM
a wonderful well written piece of poetry.
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Date: 9/8/2008 7:51:00 PM
Hi laura - Isn't it funny as we look back on life and how drastically our views and feelings change - This was a great poem - God Bless
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