The Old Man From Far Away

this old man is always there
after your soul
no one cares
he's a greedy old man

he wants what you got
all to himself
he'll put you away
like a toy on a shelf

don't give in to his dark evil stare
you may not like it
but he is always there

there shining eyes
filled with greed
run while you can
he hardly let you breathe

run little boys
run little girls
don't fall
or nothing will be yours

he hunts all night
even through the day
 here he comes
the old man from far away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 20, 2016 at 1:07 AM
Colton Charlson, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
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August 29, 2014 at 1:05 PM
interesting personification...... Your talent shines and your should find a following here on PSoup...... If you don't let the old man get hold of you..... Great writing...... Regards...... Jake
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